Aroha @ Tautoro School: Here is my marked Explanation Writing Sample

About Me

Kia Ora,

My name is Aroha. I am a year 7 student at Tautoro School. I am in a collaborative classroom with my teachers Whaea Gaylene & Miss Lesoa & whaea Lia.

My favourite school subjects are spelling, maths, and writing.

I like to finish my work in my spare time.

Toku Pepeha:

Ko mongero te maunga

Ko te huehue te awa

Ko ngai te wake te iwi

Ko kaingahoa Te marae

Ko Selwyn toku papa

Ko Steph toku mama

Ko Aroha ahau

menmt as follows:

1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.

2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question.

3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?