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Friday 30 August 2019

Thursday 22 August 2019

This is our chair stem

Student Lab Sheet: Paper Chair Challenge                    
My Questions? 



Were you successful in the challenge? Why?
No  I wasn't  successful because i never made a paper chair because i was not focssing on my work. 


What was the most difficult part of the challenge? 
The most difficult was doing our student lab sheet we had to make it make scence.


What was the best idea you came up with during this challenge?
I had an idea but i never did it. 


Did your paper chair work? Why or Why not?  What type of chair design did you use? Why?
I didn't make my chair because I had to finish my student lab sheet.  


What did you learn about construction and engineering during this challenge? 
 I learnt Something to tipe faster and lising  to the instructions being said.



Usain bolt


In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school. Because of the new enrollments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is a new hall.
Why do we need a hall?

First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs  a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and we are feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed. 

Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class.

Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen.  We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home.

Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or gala days.

In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our  Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.

                                 Score     Reasons why you have given this mark
Ideas
R4
I gave this writing a R4 because the story  has lots of ideas that connect to the topic.
Structure Language
R4
I gave this writing a R4 because the story has all of the structure and one part may be well  
developed.
Organisation
R5
I gave this writing a R5 because there ideas are organised into a  basic paragraph.
Vocabulary
R5
I gave this a R5 because they choose words and phrases to enhance meaning.
Sentence Structure
R5 
I gave this a R5 because they can write all of my sentences correctly.
Punctuation 
R5
I gave this writing a R5 because they can use correct  sentence punctuation.
Spelling
R4
I gave this writing a R4 because they spelt most essential list words correctly.
Total
37
The level is  5b.

Friday 2 August 2019

Ihumatao

                                   Ihumatao.
We are learning about Ihumatao and the land issue. We had to choose a side Maori or settlers and write how it would of been at the time.  
Here is mine.



“No you can’t take my land”, I shouted. 
I could feel my shoulders raising and hear my deep breathing. 
Get off my land !! I thought.
I scanned around slowly. I could see the women crying
  hugging
their whanau.
I could hear my whanau stomping around.

I could smell smoke from the fire.