Persuasive Writing

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing

19/10/2017

We should play sport every day.

I think we should play sport every day.

Firstly I think we should play sport every day because when we are running we are getting fit.

Secondly I think we should play sport every day because we can learn to work as a team.

Another reason why I think we should play sport every day because we learn good scos like kicking the ball.

Lastly I think we should play sport every day because our hart gets fresh aer.

So that’s why I think we should play  sport every day.

Persuasive Writing - We should do homework every night.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18.10.2017

We should do homework every night.

I think we should do homework every night.   

Firstly I think we should do homework every night because it helps us learn goals by practising our homework.

Secondly I think we should do homework every night because it helps us to grow smarter.

Another reason why I think we should do homework every night is because we can spend 1 on 1 time with our nans.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night because it helps us to learn our words.

So that’s why I think we should do homework every night.

Recount writing - Going to Rawene.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

16/10/2017

Going to Rawene.

On a hot Wednesday morning  I went with my nan Aunts and brother and Joe and sister to Rawen to go for my appointment at the doctors.

First my Aunty came with us so she could go for her appointment in Rawene hospital.

When we were travelling to RawenI looked out the window and saw some magpies. The magpies were flying. I said, “Look at that Lana.” “Oh my gosh,” said Lana. She likes magpies.  Then I felt sleepy in the car because it took a long time to get to Rawene.

Next I felt joyful when we got to the hospital. We were late. My appointment was past. It was at 10.30. I had to go in with my Aunty Milly. My aunty finally went in. I went with her. Then we were finished so we went to get fish and chips. We went to a table by the beach. I went to get the drinks from out of the car. After that we all had some food.

The food was yummy and delicious.