Recount Writting - Cross country.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

Cross country.        17/08/17                                    

“Ready set go!” shouted Whaea Rosina.

I took off like a race car. My heart was pumping super fast  like it never pumped before.

It was Wednesday morning. I was running around the Padlie farm with the 7 year old.  

The hardest thing was going up the hill 2 times.

I was so tired when I was running up the hill. It was so hot.

I felt like I was going to explode while I was running.

My side felt like I got stabbed with a knife.

On my second round I said, “I’m so tired. My heart was racing as fast as a race car.

My Aunty was saying, “Come on Aroha.” So I took off and I went past Ani. I was the first girl past the line. I felt very excited and happy.

Recount writing-At netball.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

26/7/17

Netball

On Saturday me and my sister woke early in the morning. We were at Milly’s. The first thing we did was get changed into our new clothes. Then we brushed our hair and washed our faces.

Milly said, “We are going to netball in Kerikeri.”  I said, “Yippee.” So we got in the car and went to pick up my Aunty Rita in town. Then we drove to netball in Kerikeri.

When we got there I saw heaps of people there.

I shouted, “Yippee it is cool at netball.”

We watched the teams playing netball and we ran around the courts having lots of fun.

Then I felt tired.  I said,  “Aunty Milly,can we go home?” She said, “No we have to wait till the netball games are finished.”