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Friday 5 March 2021

The dream giver

 WALT: Plan an introduction for a narrative story.

Success Criteria:  I will


  • IDescribe the characters: (what do they look like - adjectives).

  • Identify characteristics of key characters: (feelings, thoughts)

  • List vivid verbs I will use.

  • List amazing adjectives.

  • Describe the setting: (use adjectives)




Describe the Characters : 

senior 

Skinny white 

Magical 

Boldly 

Wrinkly

Black eyebrows

Small wings 

Big eyebrows

tall and long 

Googly glasses


The boy 

Tired sleepy

 dozy 

exhausted 

jaded 

snoring.

Describe the Setting:

 Muggy dull moonshine dusty 

Scary deep 



Describe the characters feelings:  

Cheerful happy  



Amazing Adjectives

White 

Dark 

Quiet 

Tall 

Thin 

Silent 

bony







:

Vivid Verbs: 

Pale 

Glowing 

Tall 

Thin 

Fresh 

 

Snozy 

Low power

-vml’

 

The Dream Giver 


Once upon a time there was a dream 

giver. He was giving good dreams. One 

Night there was a little boy. The dream 

Giver was going to give him a dream. 

So he would not have a bad one.

He grabbed out these gold shiny eggs. 

He cracked it on to a book. The book was 

Glowing godly lava it was so shiny cool.

 In the little boys dream he turned up to this 

Place. It was like a magical forest.It had lots 

And lots of butterflies everywhere.

There was something around the 

Corner. It was a big monkey 

Cave.He broke something then in the

Was two yellow. Then there was a beast 

Running after him. The dream giver was throwing

The magical eggs When he got to the beast. 

And then a tree grower on top of 

Him. 

The End


1 comment:

  1. Kia, ora this is a very interesting post I like the pictures it really helps visulise what is going on I especially liked the part about the yellow eyes in the cave sounds creepy. I think that next time you could try putting more adjectives in there and mabey some more verbs other than that it is an amazing story. I have been writing about this as well but I haven't quite finished it I finished planning and have started writing. What was your favourite part of the story I have alreadly said mine about the eyes. blog you later
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