Recount Writting - Cross country.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

Cross country.        17/08/17                                    

“Ready set go!” shouted Whaea Rosina.

I took off like a race car. My heart was pumping super fast  like it never pumped before.

It was Wednesday morning. I was running around the Padlie farm with the 7 year old.  

The hardest thing was going up the hill 2 times.

I was so tired when I was running up the hill. It was so hot.

I felt like I was going to explode while I was running.

My side felt like I got stabbed with a knife.

On my second round I said, “I’m so tired. My heart was racing as fast as a race car.

My Aunty was saying, “Come on Aroha.” So I took off and I went past Ani. I was the first girl past the line. I felt very excited and happy.