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Friday 20 October 2017

Recount writing - Going to Rawene.

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16/10/2017
Going to Rawene.
On a hot Wednesday morning  I went with my nan Aunts and brother and Joe and sister to Rawen to go for my appointment at the doctors.
First my Aunty came with us so she could go for her appointment in Rawene hospital.
When we were travelling to RawenI looked out the window and saw some magpies. The magpies were flying. I said, “Look at that Lana.” “Oh my gosh,” said Lana. She likes magpies.  Then I felt sleepy in the car because it took a long time to get to Rawene.
Next I felt joyful when we got to the hospital. We were late. My appointment was past. It was at 10.30. I had to go in with my Aunty Milly. My aunty finally went in. I went with her. Then we were finished so we went to get fish and chips. We went to a table by the beach. I went to get the drinks from out of the car. After that we all had some food.
The food was yummy and delicious.  
                   


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