WALT: Plan an introduction for a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I will
IDescribe the characters: (what do they look like - adjectives).
Identify characteristics of key characters: (feelings, thoughts)
List vivid verbs I will use.
List amazing adjectives.
Describe the setting: (use adjectives)
-vml’
The Dream Giver
Once upon a time there was a dream
giver. He was giving good dreams. One
Night there was a little boy. The dream
Giver was going to give him a dream.
So he would not have a bad one.
He grabbed out these gold shiny eggs.
He cracked it on to a book. The book was
Glowing godly lava it was so shiny cool.
In the little boys dream he turned up to this
Place. It was like a magical forest.It had lots
And lots of butterflies everywhere.
There was something around the
Corner. It was a big monkey
Cave.He broke something then in the
Was two yellow. Then there was a beast
Running after him. The dream giver was throwing
The magical eggs When he got to the beast.
And then a tree grower on top of
Him.
The End
Kia, ora this is a very interesting post I like the pictures it really helps visulise what is going on I especially liked the part about the yellow eyes in the cave sounds creepy. I think that next time you could try putting more adjectives in there and mabey some more verbs other than that it is an amazing story. I have been writing about this as well but I haven't quite finished it I finished planning and have started writing. What was your favourite part of the story I have alreadly said mine about the eyes. blog you later
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