We are learning to do a GIF.
Tuesday, 3 September 2019
Friday, 30 August 2019
Thursday, 22 August 2019
This is our chair stem
Student Lab Sheet: Paper Chair Challenge
My Questions?
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Were you successful in the challenge? Why?
No I wasn't successful because i never made a paper chair because i was not focssing on my work.
What was the most difficult part of the challenge?
The most difficult was doing our student lab sheet we had to make it make scence.
What was the best idea you came up with during this challenge?
I had an idea but i never did it.
Did your paper chair work? Why or Why not? What type of chair design did you use? Why?
I didn't make my chair because I had to finish my student lab sheet.
What did you learn about construction and engineering during this challenge?
I learnt Something to tipe faster and lising to the instructions being said.
In our Tautoro School we have so many new students who have enrolled in our school. Because of the new enrollments every time we have a powhiri or assembly we always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School is a new hall.
Why do we need a hall?
First a hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and we are feeling really squashed in our small library. If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed.
Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside. If it was raining or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class.
Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen. We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home.
Last of all we need a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring all our local communities together for meetings or gala days.
In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.
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Score Reasons why you have given this mark
Ideas
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R4
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I gave this writing a R4 because the story has lots of ideas that connect to the topic.
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Structure Language
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R4
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I gave this writing a R4 because the story has all of the structure and one part may be well
developed.
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Organisation
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R5
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I gave this writing a R5 because there ideas are organised into a basic paragraph.
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Vocabulary
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R5
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I gave this a R5 because they choose words and phrases to enhance meaning.
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Sentence Structure
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R5
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I gave this a R5 because they can write all of my sentences correctly.
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Punctuation
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R5
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I gave this writing a R5 because they can use correct sentence punctuation.
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Spelling
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R4
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I gave this writing a R4 because they spelt most essential list words correctly.
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Total
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37
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The level is 5b.
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Friday, 2 August 2019
Ihumatao
Ihumatao.
We are learning about Ihumatao and the land issue. We had to choose a side Maori or settlers and write how it would of been at the time.
Here is mine.
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“No you can’t take my land”, I shouted.
I could feel my shoulders raising and hear my deep breathing.
Get off my land !! I thought.
I scanned around slowly. I could see the women crying
hugging
their whanau.
hugging
their whanau.
I could hear my whanau stomping around.
I could smell smoke from the fire.
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